That was pretty good. It is obvious you worked hard on it. Really work on pointing your toes and strecthing your knees though. Also, if you really worked on elongating your arms and upper-body and making them more fluid you'll appear much more graceful and elegant. Because right now they look very short and static. But it was very nice to watch, keep it up, 'cause you're talented. :)

i think its good your jumps are ok but do it on pointe!!

when you are in fifth make sure that it is tight cuz it looked like you were in fourth

You're a really nice dancer, amazing extension by the way. Pointe more your feet and strech your knees a little bit more. Upload it on pointe

You're a really nice dancer, amazing extension by the way. Pointe more your feet and strech your knees a little bit more. Upload it on pointe

good dancin but do it on pointe and point those toes. not good video quality