I think you should work try to bring out kitris charatcer a little bit more. I think your an amazing dancing though keep up the good work.

You have superb feet! Try dancing alittle more lifted, not so held down.

here is a tip for you. work on how you get out of your poses because sometimes they look alittle akward. That was really nice otherwise. nice feet!!!

3 Tips: 1. You don't seem very light on your feet. But that can be easily corrected. 2. Point your feet when you jump! 3. Try to hold the poses longer. It gives them the wow factor. But overall that was really good for someone 12 years old! How long have you been dancing en pointe?